.....I Am Imitating You Poem by RIC BASTASA

.....I Am Imitating You

Rating: 3.1


.... let me flatter a friend (or is she.... a foe?)

....i am imitating him. Oh i want a color....red?

or......blue? I'll take something else..........green?

how about trees? apple trees for a background.
how about sighs? for some sounds.
how about... yes.....moans.... lots of moans.....
sex? could you?

.....you are bored and old and.....dying? ....are you?

how about cheese? lots of cheese
oh i love fumodoro tomatoes? lots of sauce.

i love being with you.
I love doing things with you inside the room.
Let me have you.
Please stay.
I still have lots of cheese, and tomatoes,
and apple trees, and reds and greens, and...

sighs.....

Wednesday, February 4, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: sex
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 14 June 2013

your last stanza is nice, good write

0 0 Reply
Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 February 2010

love does not expire between strong married couples. Nice poem!

0 0 Reply
Bryan Alexander 23 September 2009

I hate tomatoes but i like this poem. It reminds me of something Bukowski could have done and he is my favorite. Great right.

0 0 Reply
Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

I am not old, not dying, sighing yes, about life.and u in it, trying to figure it out. and no to foe no to bored.......yes to everything else.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
RIC BASTASA

RIC BASTASA

Philippines
Close
Error Success