I Am Poem Comments

Amanda, you have written words of truth. The real problem is, no one officially will be able to admit that these words have substance. And I look down at the ground, As people count me out, Because of who I am. I am shy and confused, Nice write Amanda, and keep writing. Barbara

There is something very beautiful thta shines through the sadness in this piece, Awesome poem Take care Love duncan X

I like this, Amanda. Your refrain line is like a drone. Effective. This piece reads to me like an introduction of a shy person, with hopes, fears, et al. In short, a human being. The simplicity of the language is effective, I feel.