Thursday, January 29, 2009

**i Am Yours** Comments

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when you were younger and i was a kid, i was yours
when our love was not a flower but it was a seed, i was yours.

when we insulted each other in the first time we met, i was yours
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negar shahnouri
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Daniel Brick 12 December 2015

Isn't it amazing how the feeling of love stretches our sense of being so far. The world becomes so much bigger than what we're accustomed to and our thoughts are suddenly H-U-G-E. And the experience of love which is everywhere and even commonplace seems totally unique and special. It is a glorious illusion! It is a splendid self-deception. It is what we live for. You see how your poem has inspired me! Your words in poetry made this happen to me,

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 23 April 2009

u are truly beautiful and i need not eyes 2 tell u this because i c it in this poem! u amazing! brilliant write!

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Reihaneh Jalalian 04 February 2009

very nice. Negar your poems have sth really different i dont know why but i like that. it was very beautiful also 10

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ata khan 01 February 2009

Beautiful, eastern love.

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