- I Bet It Sucks To Be You Right Now. Poem by Kara Aleid was Thomas

- I Bet It Sucks To Be You Right Now.

Rating: 2.5

I wanted to be friends but you wanted to be more
so i gave you what I thought was my all
But then it was token
and my heart was broken.

How could you do this?
what did i do so wrong?

You took every moment
and an left me with you terrible memory's.

do you still think you did the right thing?
because i still think how wrong i was to let you in my territory
you teared me apart so bad
i was clearly stupid.

My heart just wouldn't let out!
i hate you with all my heart missing parts
How could you hurt me so bad
i Dont know what i did to deserve this.

If you ever come back ill walk away just like you did to me,
i'll never let someone hurt me as bad as you did.

- I bet it sucks to be you right now.

Vipins Puthooran 20 September 2011

I can see ' sad and despair' in this poem... So nicely written..

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Stefanie Fontker 18 September 2011

Very interesting poem. Your despair is evident in this, and it's made the poem beautiful and raw. I hope all works out for you.

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Craig Anderson 18 September 2011

Really sad emotional read. But enthralling all the same. People like to see inside someone elses world and you managed it perfectly. Regards and Peace. Craig

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