I Broke Again! Comments

very sad and touching. thank you.

Very lovely piece dear shahnouri.Thanks a lot for sharing your feeling with us.Live in your soul.Be happy with your soul.

Sometimes Ms Arian writes about the needs and so I shall write a little about them myself. People need the honesty, the freshness, the energy, the immediacy, the truth that appear in this poem. I wrote too good things and so shall end with a different thought: Ms Arian needs trust in herself. Isn't a negative thought, is it?

Passionate writing........I really liked this piece....I don't agree with Becker..you kept the right tone for the feelings; ; ; I think it was deliberate...........

I have to be honest with you. This poem was a quality write, but one suggestion. Complete your words when you write don't shorten them. It takes away from the good write that it is. Grammar and punctuation really does put the polish on a good poem.; -) this was very good

Nigar, I value your emotion. So added my 10 to it. It is a lovely composition with emotion, simple and painful too. Love it.