I Can Do Better Poem by Alexandria Valena

I Can Do Better

Rating: 5.0


I hear your words, words of hate.
What have i done? We used to be so great.
You treat me like muck on your shoe,
I try my best, I've stood by you.

I think i deserve better, a bit of respect,
But why can't I leave? I can get better yet.
Arguing is all we ever seem to do,
When it comes to love you havent got a clue.

I'm sick of your stares and your evil eyes,
Your dirty looks and your friends out as spies.
Leave me alone, start being a mate,
We'll never stay together if you carry on at this rate.

I can't stand your jealousy, stop accusing me!
Your a cheating rat, stop using me!
I love you dearly but I've had enough,
Please be gentle with my heart, stop being so rough!

Tuesday, March 17, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: jealousy,sick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

This poem is well written. Bien!

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Stephen Szachnitowski 03 March 2010

An abusive relationship... I've been around people in some. The way you wrote this, conveying the emotions... you did well.

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Chhavi Anupam 17 March 2009

Beautful Alexandria keep writing Chhavi Anupam

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