I can’t take it any more:
When I look in your eyes
But no one’s in, inside
When I’m in a crowded crowd
But all alone in my own cloud
When I look inside my heart
And feel were drifting far apart
When I wake up in the morning
And I hear the sound of no one calling
When I get so, so confused
And I cannot confide in you
When I hope that I am wrong
But find out that I am right
When I answer the ringing phone
And there’s only a mono tone
When I reach the goal I set
And find it’s not what I expect
When I arrive at my destination
And it’s lost its fascination
When I struggle to get home
And find it’s just a grave
When I’m soft and so alone
And you are just like stone
I can’t take it anymore
And I don’t know what it is.
I don’t want it anymore
This is no way to exist.
And then I give a little smile
And remember this
That seasons come
And Ice will thaw
Dawn will come
And darkness will be lit.
Lovely poem David...You've spilled yourself upon the paper with this one...open, but still optimistic in the end. Hugs, Dee
i can understand the feelings... and as they say 'the show must go on', it really does.... no matter how dark the moments be... they too will pass...
David what a fantastic poem on Loss and Loneliness, great writing 10...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's funny how moods will reflect a different perspective...I read this awhile ago and thought it very optimistic...I read it now...and say to myself...but does ice always thaw? ? ? It's still a very good poem, from your heart. Hugs, Dee