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A Kiss

Rating: 3.4

Sweetness is on your lips
like honey flavoured early morning dew.
And your eyes have a depth of blue
that even deepest oceans cannot match
with a twinkling like the stars that flash
across the space between
in which our sight it seems is seen.
And your hair as in a gentle breeze
It takes each fine strand and wisps it
on the air as if a string that music makes

deep within, a heartfelt ring.
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Laury Wong 13 February 2008

Woww..that is truly beautiful...wonderful! ! ! -so romantic(sigh)

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BEAU GOLDEN 18 December 2007

Adding this to my favorites. The ultimate compliment. Great writing.~Beau.

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Ivor Hogg 03 August 2007

you obviously understand what love is when it is mutual This a poets poetry

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Tracy Rollings 25 May 2007

Because love flows and joins this is Love’s gift to all to know you are so vast, not small joined in abundant bliss that’s truly universal and found in just one loving kiss, I love everything about this poem, the flow was freat, love the stanza in this, again great write, ~10~ your friend Tracy

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Malini Kadir 24 May 2007

And all the Angels stop and stare the stars in their travels pause the sands of time suspend their race the universe so vast in space becomes a very tiny place. Because love flows and joins this is Love’s gift to all ......................................loved these lines

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Suresh Kumar Ek 23 August 2020

a seeming two are known as one no longer me and you nice lines

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Ini Mendy 26 April 2018

'....the universe so vast in space; becomes a very tiny place...' I love this line, it's the uniqueness and the power of perfect love entwined in a kiss!

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Rachel Butler 27 November 2009

'Sweetness is on your lips like honey flavoured early morning dew' Rachel Ann Butler

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Fay Slimm 15 August 2008

David I have read many pove poems in my time, and I too write of love, but truly this is inspired work. Many tens, and please go on producing from your heart. Greetings from Fay Slimm, Cornwall U.K.

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Sadiqullah Khan 03 June 2008

just one loving kiss, , , we long for, , , here is a very good poem penned with consistent metaphor and passion

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