Monday, November 16, 2015

I Can't Take This Comments

Rating: 4.7

It’s like a big storm
has taken over your body.
The world is grey.
Nothing is fun any more.
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Harry Collins
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Chinedu Dike 21 November 2015

Depiction, anxiety, and the deplorable condition of life at its lowest ebb is well depicted in the poem. A good piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Harry. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 16 November 2015

I live there. Nice Penning, Harry

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Souren Mondal 16 November 2015

'people say, just be happy. Get over it. But I can't because I want to die.' As a man who is being diagnosed with major depression and anxiety, I can feel this poem Harry.. People say 'you are just sad', 'get over it', 'cheer up' etc. As if we - who are depressed - choose this by our own will... Thank you very much for this poem.. It really touched my heart.. And, maybe it would mean nothing, as it had meant nothing to me when people said this, but still - Hang in their buddy - this too shall pass... Blessings and good luck.. Thank you..

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