Sunday, December 3, 2017

I Cry For You Comments

Rating: 4.5

From this hotel window
I saw them dragged you away
Cheering and clapping
Proud of their catch
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Janaki Nilmini
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Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. The superiority of man over other creatures of the EARTH is aptly captured in the poem. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Janaki and do remain enriched.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 December 2017

A beautifully crafted write. It captures that man has power and dominion over some living creatures..10

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Janaki Nilmini 03 December 2017

Thank you for your appreciation.

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Janaki Nilmini 03 December 2017

Thank you Rose, Man exerts his power over all fellow creatures.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 03 December 2017

A beautiful write. Yes there is a world Man needs to acknowledge which is the same in which he lives. Water kingdom has its own way of answering if we don't hear. Thank you

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Janaki Nilmini 03 December 2017

Thank you for reading, your comments are appreciated. I agree, it has answered many times.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2017

Cheering and clapping express emotion over perception. This is a thought provoking and amazing poem shared.10

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Janaki Nilmini 03 December 2017

Thank you for reading and I appreciate your feedback.

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