Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,581 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Dislike - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I dislike

I dislike
When she likes poem with comment “Like “
I expect something more
Her silence makes me to feel bore

It may take me backward
With less striking words
Taking not at all forward
But pulling downwards

What poet can do?
The message has to be passed through
Any means that is suitable
And worthwhile

Poet has his own way
Of carrying away
The masses in typical style
To go with many more miles

Yes, people have right to differ
Put in some other ideas and offer
The innovative solution
That shall be leading to revolution

I given o such suggestions
And put no more questions
Rather I fall in line with
And strengthen the poem with sharp teeth

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Comments about I Dislike by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2015 6:46:00 AM)


    welcome Kanusing Solanki and Sattie Singh like this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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    0 person liked.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/1/2015 11:42:00 AM)


    Sattie Singh likes this. Comments welcom Unlike · Reply · 1 ·
    37 minutes ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/1/2015 10:23:00 AM)


    I given o such suggestions
    And put no more questions
    Rather I fall in line with
    And strengthen the poem with sharp teeth
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 1, 2015



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