I Don'T Care

So what if I am
As shallow as the footprints in the sand
I may have no one
To follow my works and plan
Even my husband
May not give a glimpse
Nor even spare his time
This is just nothing
To his care this will not matter
But this is my new world
I am free here
And no one takes in control
Even if my English is poor
They can’t stop me from sharing my thoughts
You may throw me
The unkindest word
Spit on my face
Erase me on your pace
I can take all of these
Because you’re also free
As free as my spirit here
Wednesday, September 22, 2010
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COMMENTS
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2010
nd no one takes in control Even if my English is poor They can’t stop me from sharing my thoughts You may throw me The unkindest word....... very nice and frank views.. 10 you are lady rose beautiful flower to choose aligned with trust to repose You are the only one not to loose.. take care
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 03 November 2010
of course not, you write well ma'am.your poems are magnificent. And i agree that I, too, feel free and appreciated here. Cheers to you.
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Bert Bell 28 October 2010
Your English is just fine, Lady Rose. You write beautiful poetry and you have a loving heart. It shows in your poems. 10
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Ken E Hall 30 September 2010
Thats what freedom of speech is all about...doing the right thing you don't have to stand up to no one....you have earned your poetship..but some apple heads babble on nonsensical rubbish.thanks for the shout out loud..regards
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Aranthabailu Ummar 23 September 2010
you are the lotus, a pure flower emerging from dirt some times carelessness will leads to walk our own path most part of the world is still good only a little bit is negetive So with you all is there With warm A Ummar
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majid Alsaady 22 September 2010
this is my world / i am free here. gorgeous / keep on next poem u ll feel the great satisfaction of the caring mother poetry.just dont panic in the mid way. i like it as sincere and honest thou simple and direct but to the very point.i give it a 10++++.
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majid Alsaady 22 September 2010
gorgeous. donot be frightened.now u v got ur freewill to express yourself.poetry is the the world that would take u as a mother cares for her babling child. just dont hesitate the time u climd the first step u ll catch the satisfaction that u hadnt & wouldnt feel like all ur life. i like it thou simple feelings but genuine
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