I don't love you that much
I don't want you as such
I don't long for your touch
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it is more poetic to say idont love than the other way around...good read!
Quite concise. It makes sense to be so. My mind is in limbo about the line But my words are too few though... it could probably be changed
Why don't you go to nature and learn what love is? Might help with you confusion.
Wow..... Thats straight and true and so ofcourse genuine. Rhythmicaly n nicely writen I like this Asif.... Keep writing