I Dream In Words Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

I Dream In Words

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theres a yacht on this boulvard,
and a overture pounding in my
head, theres a gypsy with a upside
down cross, and a clown to set him
strait, theres a stink in this vision,
and it smells like red, pink, and
purple flowers,

still this broken fan sounds like
some one typing, or a loud vhs,
being reround, and the tv turns
blue, and the actors smile and
play their part.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 October 2006

You most certainly do, my talented friend, and this, here, once again, is yet another slice of proof to that claim...Nice Write, David! ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; FJR

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Catastrophe King 06 October 2006

Indeed... a matured write this is, as I agree with Goldy Locks here.. good stuff & matured!

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Goldy Locks 06 October 2006

i like it. reminds me of dylan comma bob. good stuff, Sus ~

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