I Feel Joy Poem by Cecilia Chipendo

I Feel Joy



When I look in your eyes
I find joy and peace
When you hold me in your arms
I found comfort


When am not in the mood
You make me happy
Love is what brought us together.
I feel joy in love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tan Pratonix 01 February 2006

Good poem. Can be improved. There is a confusion of tenses. May I suggest that the poem would read better as follows: When I look into your eyes I find joy and peace; When you hold me in your arms I find comfort. When I'm not in the mood You make me happy; Love is what has brought us together. I feel joy in love.

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Charles Chaim Wax 18 January 2006

what a blessing this fine poem expressing love and devotion keep up the good work

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