I found out today
the day you went away
the laughters turned into cries
with every last goodbye
know i know your up in the heavens
now it's my turn to cry
but now we know
the days go so slow
but someday we are all gonna die! !
surely departure is some one is very painful.but we have to live.we have to face all this.this is the reality of life.but my friend i am with you.
Nice easy wording for comparisons(sp?) , well versed, made sense. Cudos!
That was very good, i really enjoyed the poem even though it was obvious that we're all gonna die
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lovely poem, emma. so sad we all experinece it wherever whoever we are. god is fair.