I Heard Your Call From Sleep To Wake Alone Poem by Danny Draper

I Heard Your Call From Sleep To Wake Alone

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I heard your call from sleep to wake alone
Could have sworn we were together,
Often we are mistaken on our own.


A home swells its boisterous gaggle grown
Then empty, nudges hope or wind whatever,
I heard your call from sleep to wake alone.

Did we ever have that which is no longer known,
Are vanished days imagined treasure?
Often we are mistaken on our own.

A lived love lost will be forever prone
To a dream like state of pleasure,
I heard your call from sleep to wake alone.

Wishful think, or pray, or loudly raucous moan,
Ecstasy regrets no positions measure,
Often we are mistaken on our own.

We aimless fall to crash within the zone,
Neither true nor real, no matter whether
I heard your call from sleep to wake alone,
Often we are mistaken on our own.

Danny Draper
10/6/2015

Thursday, June 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 26 June 2015

i think i understand pretty well. Memories of what was, are not always very accurate. divorce or death of a partner after children have moved out? i just noticed the rest of the rhyme scheme! sometimes trying to be accurate and consistent with a scheme throughout a poem can cause the poem to suffer some. that's my opinion, of course. I like the extra space, intentional or not, between stanzas 1 and 2. I also like the larger than norm last stanza and that it incorporates earlier lines. I shall add this poem to my June showcase on my PH site now. thanks. bri :)

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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