jyoti negi


I Know I Am The One - Poem by jyoti negi

I know I am the happiest person in this world,
Because I love who I am..
I know my eyes are beautiful,
The reason - it can feel the pain of tears.
I know my smile is cute and genuine,
Because sometimes it is the reason of someone else's smile.
I know my heart is so pure,
That it can never hurt the feelings of heart.
For me, life is a rainbow,
Having several colors of love and happiness.
You not only have to choose your favorite color,
But also have to fill it in life..
If you start enjoying life the way it should be,
It will be wonderful to see the world from my eyes..

Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational

Form: Narrative


Comments about I Know I Am The One by jyoti negi

  • Vishal Sharma (11/15/2015 2:11:00 PM)


    awesome work do check mine if time permits u (Report) Reply

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  • (11/7/2015 2:43:00 AM)


    Thank you very much Souren for correcting my mistake, I really appreciate it :) (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/7/2015 1:20:00 AM)


    'I know my smile is cute and genuine,
    Because sometimes it is the reason of someone else's smile.
    I know my heart is so pure,
    That it can never hurts the feelings of heart.'

    Very well written written lines Jyoti, and as it seems you are a poet of positivity and optimistic thinking.. That is really great..

    Thank you for sharing..

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    P: S: In the line 'That it can never HURTS the feelings of heart.' did you mistakenly used the 'third person singular' form for the verb 'hurt'? ? I think it should be 'hurt' not 'hurts', isn't it? ? Please check that one out..

    Thank you for your poems BTW..
    cheers :)
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  • Jaishree Nair (11/6/2015 3:18:00 AM)


    A pure heart wanting only the best for others is reflected in the lines..Enjoyed.Thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 7, 2015


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