I Know, I Saw Poem by Benjamin Feliciano

I Know, I Saw

Rating: 4.0


It's over, you win, I'll probably never smile again.
It's freezing here where it was once hot,
I'm speeding from class to class, hoping I don't get
caught.
I know who's at fault and need not be reminded.
But the scent of failure makes me long to rewind it.
An uncommon sensation, this 'being replaced';
Its as though I've set myself up to be disgraced.
I'm aware it was I, who made said vacancy,
But right in front of me? As though I can not see?
A former love that once merited a symphony,
The only recourse now a discordant cacophony.
Left again to unrequited devices,
I'm filling buckets with sand, filled already with
holes of my vices.
The warmth returns, but only from covetous envy,
So quickly I've gone from the lover to the enemy.
Familiar quirks, now impressed upon him.
The message after the credits, tells me this is,
FIN.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Smahlt 30 March 2009

god poem you write your experiense well.good work.keep writing!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success