Benjamin Feliciano

Rookie (January 2,1991 / Oceanside, CA)

Ultra Violet Diet - Poem by Benjamin Feliciano

I never had an addiction to Mountain Dew,
I had an addiction to you.
Polite conversations, go by so fast.
My only goal: to make you laugh.
The first, perhaps of many
Written with you in mind.
Interesting, smart, and pretty;
There are too few of your kind.
It is unlikely that you will ever read this,
Because it's unlikely that I'll ever show.
But even if you never do,
At least I know I'll know.


Comments about Ultra Violet Diet by Benjamin Feliciano

  • (12/28/2009 6:23:00 PM)


    This is rather delightful Benjamin. The sort of love poem that I'd love to find written about me, he he. Rest assured your lady friend will receive it - all words penned with love find their mark. Your final line is particularly engaging. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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  • James Mclain Is It Poetry (12/22/2009 10:24:00 PM)


    It is in double agreement
    with he below, i agree..iip
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  • Romeo Della Valle (12/22/2009 10:19:00 PM)


    I once was there, that the reason I wrote the poem titled 'A LOVE'S ADDICTION'. that is life which must keep going on, Your piece, well penned, keep it up! great talent you got,10+++Love and Peace...






















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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 30, 2011


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