choco pie shreyasi

Rookie - 63 Points (30-11-1996 / gwaliour)

I Like It! ! - Poem by choco pie shreyasi

Some special feelings,
Some beau-ideal dealings,
Have the power of healing,
It's beyond any meaning! !
It's about some feelings...
I don't need my hippocampus,
Hard to hit! !
It's all in my mind,
Revolving around when I sit! !
N I say 'I like it! ! '

While crossing the lanes,
U hold my hand tight,
For this moment I can really fight...
It's like u rush away my pains! !
In an amaze my eyes lit! !
N I like it! !

When sad,
U are the one...
Who rush towards me like a mad,
U are the one...
Who swirl my hair behind my ears,
U are the one...
Who sweep my tears! !
N rush away my fears...
I love these moments,
It's enough even a bit! !
N I like it! !

When angry,
U are the one...
Who pulls my cheeks,
U are the one...
Who makes me giggle & my smile leaks! !
My world u always lit! !
N I like it! !

When zanny,
U are the one...
With me to be ninny-pinny,
In my world's every frame u fit! !
N I like it! !

I like it...
When u hold my arm,
N make me feel warm! !
I like it...
When u understand my flair,
Even when I m not clear! !
I don't know,
U pretend or u are just like that?
I don't know,
U mean or u not! !
But u always,
Lit my heart,
Reserving a corner's major part! !

In my small world u perfectly fit,
I always have a smile when we together sit,
N I know...u know...
That I like it! !

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wish I could have a person just like this in my life! ! this is one of the most fav poems of mine! ! hope u'll enjoy it! !

Comments about I Like It! ! by choco pie shreyasi

  • Jazib Kamalvi (10/3/2017 1:37:00 AM)

    A refined poetic imagination, Choco. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (8/27/2015 3:55:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem, Choco. I hope your dreams come true (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 27, 2015

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