I Live From Smile To Smile Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

I Live From Smile To Smile

Rating: 3.5


How do i live..
From smile to smile..
When together..
We smile..and the suns..
eye lays open to the sky..
We crack open...cool nights..
Mixing our smiles..
With the pink of the dawn..
When you smile..
The stars must part..when..
Comets trail..trickles down to..
Paints your lips..with the dust..
Of a moon..when they fly to near..
Inside the light..Of your smile..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 13 July 2009

nice visual metaphor: ''Comets trail..must.. Paints your lips..with the dust.'' embedded in this lyric poem of cosmic love...10+++ from me

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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