Ankur Shrivastava

Rookie (19th March 1989 / India)

I Live In You. - Poem by Ankur Shrivastava

My love dwells in your heart
Like a baby in the womb
Of surrogate mother,

Unwanted, perhaps not cherished
Yet nurtured with great care,

Arising emotions conflicting,
Yet so tender;
I live in you.


Comments about I Live In You. by Ankur Shrivastava

  • Preeti - is here! (4/24/2007 11:18:00 PM)

    The reference to the baby in the womb of a surrogate mother is definitely the high point. And i sir agree with Lal sir and think that rhyme wasn't needed!

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  • Lal ParameswarLal Parameswar (3/22/2007 5:58:00 AM)

    Nice but why can't you write it in a rhyming way? If this is your style, then kudos... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 22, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 5, 2011


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