My love dwells in your heart
Like a baby in the womb
Of surrogate mother,
Unwanted, perhaps not cherished
Yet nurtured with great care,
Arising emotions conflicting,
Yet so tender;
I live in you.
Nice but why can't you write it in a rhyming way? If this is your style, then kudos...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The reference to the baby in the womb of a surrogate mother is definitely the high point. And i sir agree with Lal sir and think that rhyme wasn't needed! Preets