I'Ll Be Your Ocean Poem by Alexzia Ferdinand

I'Ll Be Your Ocean

Rating: 3.0


on my reflections down the beach
i saw a boy.
his storm torn eyes focused straight
ahead. not the glorious
setting sun,
but the whitecapped,
raging waves
held his rapture.
i invited myself
to join him and questioned 'why? '
he halfsmiled patiently
and said, 'the waves don't leave me alone at night'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 21 November 2006

'not.. rapture' was a fabulous line. An imaginative write, Alexzia.

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Theorem Thetruthserum 19 November 2006

that was awesome...very good.

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