I Love Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Love

Rating: 4.5


I love my creative work and simple friend
They may be from different background and trend
They seem to be gifted with lot of tact
I feel so small before them as matter of fact

I open my self to the close and intimate
Of course their entry in life is very late
I openly admit the fact and state
I accept them with love and never hate

It has bridged my sentiments with them
My endless love flows out of the stem
They unseat me from my position and claim
Very close acquaintance but never put blame

I feel nothing without them but offer no reaction
My eyes always speak for them with action
Young girls come so easily with frank admission
I have no option but to grant the permission

They may go in for any relation they prefer
I need not to stress for it and refer
One gets so much attached with long relation
It is true feeling that leads to the elation

I love to react cautiously with affirmation
It more painful to part with when results in negation
On line relation is not that difficult to maintain
Only you got to remain vigilant and sustain

They may be seen always on line and very active
Laden with problems and seemingly very passive
They may fall easily in line and open up
This is the only link that makes them runner up

Temptation is never fanned by the flame
Once if you are in then don’t feel shame
It produces sweet melody in song
It may remain for long even if you go wrong

I had surrendered and completely fallen through
It was only to her response “how are you”?
I was carrying red hot volcano in burning pot
I asked “will you be positively responding to it or not?


Eyes can’t hide it and tongue can’t speak
I have lost the nerve and become very weak
Slowly I breathe the air and painfully leave
Who to be blame for and made to believe

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darshna Chopra 06 August 2010

I love my creative work and simple friend They may be from different background and trend/// love for creative work....10

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Chand Shikari 15 July 2010

I love my creative work and simple friend They may be from different background and trend They seem to be gifted with lot of tact... one must love and friends...10

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Kamlesh Ambalal 04 July 2010

I love my creative work and simple friend They may be from different background and trend.... nicely composed poem....10

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Gautam Sen 04 March 2010

HI my honorable poet, What I read here is fantastic & explosive. You've opened up your mind. You still have a genuine urge to have new and new friends - and when it is made, some element of love love in your heart gets mingled with it too. Good, its so naturally flown through your words of expression here. A good sensible poem and sweet too. Just a typo I noticed here, I was carrying read hot volcano in burning pot.. will it not be red in place of read? Regards, Gautam

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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