Friday, October 27, 2006

I Love Her But She Doesnt Notice Comments

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I love her yet she doesnt seem to notice
my warm eyes full with her and she doesnt even know
when i touch her arm i know no bounds of joy
and when she laughs my heart leaps from my chest
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Michael Stevens
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Jeremy Horsford 10 May 2015

Suffering in silence. What a sad state of affairs. Keep the poems coming fella!

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Javier Meniovich 30 July 2007

If words could describe how much that poem decribes me i would say them but i cant, , , , That was a very well written and played poem it came strate from teh heart keep up the good work

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Evaughn Gray 28 July 2007

ouch i really felt the pain on this one....i give this one a ten..~hazel

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David Dennis 29 October 2006

Ahh.. I have that trouble. It's doubly galling to watch her light up with limbic delight to some other dude who doesn't really care. I guess if the other dude lit up too it'd be even harder. I could go on but I wont.

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Patricia Gale 27 October 2006

So sad, love not returned. You have described these feeling well.

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