I love her yet she doesnt seem to notice
my warm eyes full with her and she doesnt even know
when i touch her arm i know no bounds of joy
and when she laughs my heart leaps from my chest
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If words could describe how much that poem decribes me i would say them but i cant, , , , That was a very well written and played poem it came strate from teh heart keep up the good work
ouch i really felt the pain on this one....i give this one a ten..~hazel
Ahh.. I have that trouble. It's doubly galling to watch her light up with limbic delight to some other dude who doesn't really care. I guess if the other dude lit up too it'd be even harder. I could go on but I wont.
So sad, love not returned. You have described these feeling well.
Suffering in silence. What a sad state of affairs. Keep the poems coming fella!