I Love You My Teacher Poem by Prativa Rani

I Love You My Teacher

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For the care
You rendered
Like a father or a mother,
Like the concern
you had for me
Like a gardener's
for the flower.

You loved me more,
More than a lover would
when a beloved is ugly
no more that pretty
like the day she met him.


But you did,
you loved me ever,
never saw me in the eyes
that others did,
you never made me feel
I am grown up.
And that I have a body
Bulging some where
with my youth
Curves some where
As I grew.


But you had always
A pair of loving eyes
that made me bath
with a sense of safe laps
like my mother's
You had those pair of eyes
that saw me through me,
my eyes, unaware that
I was no more a kid of ten,
I had no more a body of kid,
I had already been
A river of youth
Seeking a local sea
To jump into.


But you always had
The same eyes, and a look on
Never making me feel
Uneasy, naked with dresses on
A rarest of rare heart
And the purest of pure mind
I would ever have
I would ever live
I would ever love
And aloud I want to say
I love you.
I love you,
I love you, ,
my teacher
my gardener,
my lover,
my God,
And everything that I have,
I owe it to you,
My Master,
I love you
My dearest Sir
My teacher.

I Love You My Teacher
Monday, October 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,longing,love and art,love and friendship,love and life,my dearest me,teacher
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am lucky enough to have a teacher in you. You are and shall remain a friend, philosopher, guide, mentor, a living God, a real partner, a real and pure hearted lover for me. My first poem is a tribute to the infinite love you have rendered all through my growing days, now to bloom into a pretty young lady.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rupert Hentzau 18 November 2017

Something terribly wrong with this poem. More of a perversion, I think. Read the lines: You loved me more, More than a lover would and you never made me feel I am grown up. And that I have a body Bulging some where with my youth Curves some where As I grew.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2017

A brilliant poem is shared. 10

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Prativa Rani 08 November 2017

Thanks dear Sir for the inspiration and great remarks.

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Khairul Ahsan 30 October 2017

Excellent tribute. I envy your teacher.

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Prativa Rani 08 November 2017

Thanks dear Ahsanji for the inspiration and great remarks.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 06 January 2021

A beautiful poem of gratitude

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Dr. Antony Theodore 06 January 2021

But you had always A pair of loving eyes that made me bath with a sense of safe laps like my mother's Very fine expressions of love and appreciation. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 November 2020

Write comment. Such a beautiful start, Prativa. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Suratha Kumar Rout 09 September 2019

Nice poem. Really I enjoy it. Thanks for sharing.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 23 June 2019

I have been read this poem more than 10 times.Now I am waiting for your next poem.

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