Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Thursday, November 1, 2012

I Love You This Holy Words I Want To Say Comments

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My eyes start walking on tiptoe
To follow wherever you go
My ears start stealing your every word
To listen to the words I haven't heard
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Asif Andalib
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Yash Shinde 02 November 2012

so cute and wonderful beautiful similes and metaphors great :)

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Habeeb Kayode Yahaya 02 November 2012

wow what a wonderful poem, , , i love your dictions your rhyms your methaphoric descriptions, , keep it up

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Ruwanal Liyanage 02 November 2012

passionate intimacy. love the lines. keep up the gud work

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Larra Papazian 01 November 2012

What a perfect write, what perfectly choice of words, I liked it keep good work up!

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Poetheart Morgan 01 November 2012

Asif, you change! ! ! ! ! Good and romantic! ! ! ! Love the sounds of drums! ! ! ! ! They always enunciated something good

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Kathrin P. 01 November 2012

the first two lines are my favourite lines. I love this poem. thanks for sharing

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Shai Cherry 01 November 2012

such good work and nice flow

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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