My eyes start walking on tiptoe
To follow wherever you go
My ears start stealing your every word
To listen to the words I haven't heard
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wow what a wonderful poem, , , i love your dictions your rhyms your methaphoric descriptions, , keep it up
passionate intimacy. love the lines. keep up the gud work
What a perfect write, what perfectly choice of words, I liked it keep good work up!
Asif, you change! ! ! ! ! Good and romantic! ! ! ! Love the sounds of drums! ! ! ! ! They always enunciated something good
the first two lines are my favourite lines. I love this poem. thanks for sharing
so cute and wonderful beautiful similes and metaphors great :)