I'm going under, Poem by Kieran J1996
I'm going under,
I'm going under,
Deep within the surface,
To the bottom,
Where only despair dwells,
Its pulling me down,
Clawing at my heart,
Cooling my beating chest,
I feel despair's limitless power,
It is eternal,
Lasting forever,
Dragging me down,
Into the murky depths,
The only place dark enough.
That in which it may live,
At the back of the mind,
Deep within the soul,
Yet free on ones lips,
i've been there. and clawing ur way to the surface may never seem worth it, but when you breath again and can see again..... u know that ur pain wuz not in vain. dark.... not bad. lolz.
Remind me the title of evanescence song, this one is dark.and u look good in dark, but we not vampire lol (hhahahaha) so sometimes maybe u can wash ur soul with light..it pure some impurities..it will make u a new direction of poem..i love to live in dark but i love to bathe with light too... good piece..keep writing talented friend
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4/30/2024 1:04:43 AM # 1.0.0.1119
this is a reallllly good poem. although its a dark poem, its so good and really well written. and loadss of people, i think, including me sometimes, go through that place :)