I’m in love with my brother’s girl
The voice of my heart can’t really tell.
My feelings like old is back
That pride of a man I now lack.
Is it cool on my path to tell her?
Or it will be heavy on my heart forever?
I’m insane to think of this
Leading my love to abyss,
I’ve vowed I’ll never love again
Why am I going back to this love of pain?
I have searched in me; this ill feelings
It’s a betrayal, these brotherly dealings.
I have fought with my intention to beat
This preposterous thought I can’t hit.
Friends to this; they can’t let
Knowing for her I’ll get.
She’s on and there to thrill me
Always there to share love with thee.
Should I lay to her my love intention?
Or tell her with a lovely pretension.
Will she be faithful to pronounce to me “I do? ”
She may howl me off, when due.
A short term to go as lovers
I may loose the trust from my brother forever.
I have to go back and think this twice
Curtail my feelings, and never compromise.
No to her, is a brave answer
A long road to go with my lovely brother
How will this vague story be told?
Forever pains I’ll hold.
“It’s absurd” I have to admit
To this my heart will never permit.
I wouldn’t hide and love in secret
Loving her, my pride I’ll forfeit.
This story will never be told well
That I’m in love with my brother’s girl!
very nice poem dear but then how to cheat on your brother i dunno difficult situation well for bringing out the story in a narrative form ill give you a 9/10
Honor is never self-serving. I hope this advise is not too late. Betrayal of honor will always bring regret to all involved. The poem is obviously heartfelt although, since it is in English, it does present some English grammatic challenges. Adeline
what do i have to say about myself, being in love with my brother's girl. what do you think i do about this. i'm perplex and helpless. i love this poem so much, it speaks something.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The poem is so deep, a choice between your love or the trust of your brother. Follow your heart, but know whatever choice you will make is not going to be easy, either way it is going to hurt. Nice one GP.