Harley My Last Name

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'I'M Sorry' - Poem by Harley My Last Name

I'm sorry i cant be who you want me to.
I'm sorry i'm not the perfect daughter.
I'm sorry i cant always show my emotions.
I'm sorry i fall to fast.
I'm sorry i cant live my life the way you want.
I'm sorry i dont give up that easy on love.
I'm sorry i get mad for all the wrong reasons.
I'm sorry i loose interest.
I'm sorry i like the night sky.
I'm sorry i'm not like you.
I'm sorry i live a rollercoaster.
I'm sorry i dont have high expectations in life.
I'm sorry my lifes not made of goals.
I'm sorry i hide the real me.
I'm sorry i dont want to be famous.
I'm sorry i cant be part of a crowd.
I'm sorry i like being alone.
I'm sorry my musics to dark.
I'm sorry my love feels so far away.
I'm sorry i was made to be different.
I'm sorry i was made to be imperfect.
I'm sorry i cant love my life.
I'm sorry i cant be perfect.
I'm sorry i cant even hate people anymore.
I'm sorry i cant be like the rest of the world.


Comments about 'I'M Sorry' by Harley My Last Name

  • (7/10/2010 2:11:00 AM)


    great poem.. the repeat of the of the words 'I'm sorry' gives this poem a musical effect and i really enjoyed reading this poem.

    keep it up! ! !
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  • (6/27/2008 4:14:00 PM)


    great work harley! The repitition, like Greenwolfe said, was excellent and made me feel as if you really wanted to tell everyone your sorry. Expression was great, and i could see if the sadness pouring the words, as usual, excellent job! (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2008 5:45:00 PM)


    I liked this as well. Repetition is a good thing in poetry or any writing that needs to be remembered. I would advise everyone to read a poem of mine called 'Sorry'
    because it takes a different view of this word, but this is just fine.

    GW62
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  • (6/21/2008 8:56:00 PM)


    one word....awesome. i love it. excellent job. two thumbs up. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 29, 2008


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