'Her Heart' Poem by Harley My Last Name

'Her Heart'

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Every year since she started dating a peice of her shattered heart has been taken and collected by the man of her dreams. Though her dreams are still to blurry to see she knows that she is close to finding that guy. Because she is still to young the man of her dreams for now may not be the guy she marries but at least he will make her happy. As he collects the peices to her heart he puts them together like a puzzle for the day they unite. When that day comes he will hand her his heart and promise not to break hers again. He goes through the days hoping she will do the same for his. As time progresses she never gives up hope on finding the guy who collected her heart. She prays the day will come soon for as she feels like she is getting weak. Now she is going in and out of the hospital feeling sick. Her heart is still pushing to live but her body is fadng away. Minutes go by and a man walks into the room. As he looks over to her he knew thats the heart he has been collecting. While shes laying in the bed he walks over to her and hands her a bouquet of roses with his heart. Together they know that in the next world they will be together. Doctors say her chances to live are low but he stays at her side until the end. A week goes by and he cant make it to her funeral cause he passed on with her from his stroke. Now their dream came true to be together forever. In the end if its true love it will always stay together. Now they are two sixteen year olds that will have each other no matter what.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 10 July 2010

you are giving poetry a new face by your poems and i agree with my fellow poets that this is well written and well expressed.... your style is unique..... keep it up

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 30 April 2009

a written masterpiece..bravo spectacular work!

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Joshua Decker 22 June 2008

quite good. by far my favorite of your poems so far.

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I agree with rose that is a very beautiful write! ! ! ! ! !

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thats really beautiful. i like that its real, yet poem like. its a dream seet in reality. two souls merge. two hearts converge. and there in becomes one. new.

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