Brittany Hafer

I'M Sorry

I'm sorry my only son
for all the things I've done
I've tried to teach you right
but I've only taught you wrong
please forgive me
for I'm sorry for everything, my only son

Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 14, 2008

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/16/2009 10:57:00 PM)

    unsaid things absorbed in four lines dr

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  • Darkness Everywhere (2/6/2009 10:22:00 AM)

    that really good i really like it. it has a lot of feeling in it. is it to do with your life? keep writing its so good

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  • ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~!! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (12/5/2008 9:37:00 AM)

    your poems are always sweet and cute.really nice and full of feelings.......

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  • Yaseen Anwer (10/9/2008 9:26:00 AM)

    Beautiful construction
    a powerful stroke by pen
    keep going.....

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  • James Riviera (9/24/2008 9:00:00 AM)

    i think its shortness makes it just that much more meaningful.

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  • Whitney Nicole Albright* (9/23/2008 10:56:00 AM)

    That's short and sweet.

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