Brittany Hafer

If Only

-If only you knew what I feel about you,
-If only you thought I was your one and true Love,
-If only you felt something beautiful to me,
-If only you were the one that I love,
-If Only-

Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 20, 2008

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Comments about If Only by Brittany Hafer

  • Darkness Everywhere (2/6/2009 10:29:00 AM)

    thats really good its very sweet and from the heart. keep it up

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  • Rakhi Jayashankar (9/27/2008 11:19:00 AM)

    you must dfinitely have felt the flavour of love that your word speak so loud

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  • Lonely Troubadour (8/5/2008 12:58:00 PM)

    a wonderful work, kept short and simple it's simplicity alludes to something more... beneath the surface, it was a pleasure to read

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  • Blue Eyes (8/5/2008 10:21:00 AM)

    very nice hypothical poem.i love it

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  • Kathia Elena (5/21/2008 6:10:00 PM)

    this short poem is nice
    but it would of been nicer
    if u would off express more
    feelings to what u really
    wanted to say

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  • Helena Alvarez (4/25/2008 11:28:00 PM)

    If only what? ?
    Hmm this is a mystery
    but very good

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  • Dion Barker (4/2/2008 12:33:00 PM)

    VERY LOVING... BUT YOUR HOLDING BACK WHAT YOU WANT THE POEM TO SAY..... AB

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  • Amie-Lee ...... (3/25/2008 7:05:00 PM)

    I agree. Good work though.

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (3/20/2008 2:11:00 PM)

    This seems more a true lament than a true anything.
    I'd like to have heard more.

    Gw62

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