If Only Poem by Brittany Hafer

If Only

Rating: 4.7


-If only you knew what I feel about you,
-If only you thought I was your one and true Love,
-If only you felt something beautiful to me,
-If only you were the one that I love,
-If Only-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 20 March 2008

This seems more a true lament than a true anything. I'd like to have heard more. Gw62

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Amie-Lee ...... 25 March 2008

I agree. Good work though.

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Dion Barker 02 April 2008

VERY LOVING... BUT YOUR HOLDING BACK WHAT YOU WANT THE POEM TO SAY..... AB

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Helena Alvarez 25 April 2008

If only what? ? Hmm this is a mystery but very good

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Darkness Everywhere 06 February 2009

thats really good its very sweet and from the heart. keep it up

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Rakhi Jayashankar 27 September 2008

you must dfinitely have felt the flavour of love that your word speak so loud

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a wonderful work, kept short and simple it's simplicity alludes to something more... beneath the surface, it was a pleasure to read

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Blue Eyes 05 August 2008

very nice hypothical poem.i love it

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Kathia Elena 21 May 2008

this short poem is nice but it would of been nicer if u would off express more feelings to what u really wanted to say

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