Brittany Hafer

Untitled

Dry your eyes, and shed no more tears...
Your discomforts have been laid to waste..
The bitterness has deprived it's way out of your mouth..
Leaving you no more sadness to taste.

It was wrong of him to treat you in such a way..
And I hope that in time he will see..
He's lost all his hope; All his smiles he withheld..
By letting go of your beauty.

So let your eyes shine the bright glow that was there..
As bright as it was once before..
No longer will you endure the hostile abuse..
That you once welcomed into your door..

There's always hope left for a generation new..
So long as you leave some behind..
Move onto another; and then you'll discover..
The light to which you were once blind.

There's never pain of moving on..
If you aren't scared of what you'll let go.

Poem Submitted: Friday, September 19, 2008
Poem Edited: Friday, October 31, 2008

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Comments about Untitled by Brittany Hafer

  • Rakhi Jayashankar (9/27/2008 11:16:00 AM)

    Let the title be the untitled
    well nice work very matured

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  • Emily OldhamEmily Oldham (9/21/2008 1:21:00 PM)

    I'm afraid i dont know what a good title would be either. i do know that its a fab poem, keep it up!

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  • Amber ... (9/19/2008 4:45:00 PM)

    wow nice title LOL anyways I love this poem. It is really good.

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