I'M Sorry Poem by Lacey Saulisbury

I'M Sorry



Tears are falling,
From beautiful eyes.
Tears are falling,
Because of my lies.

Tears are falling,
Because of what I said.
Tears are falling,
Into this bed.

Tears are falling,
In a beautiful stream.
Tears are falling,
Because of a your dream.

Tears are falling,
Because of my lies.
Tears are falling,
As this beautiful dies.

Sunday, April 26, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,lies,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry A. Lanier 26 April 2009

Very good flow structure and content for this aspiring poet.....also a cognizant and behavioral approach to understanding..

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