I'm Trying Poem by Phil Soar

I'm Trying



I keep on trying, though It's harder now
I'm realising that I'm lost somehow
And though I'm positive, I feel so low
An empty feeling deep inside that on the outside doesn't show

Monday, January 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margaret O Driscoll 18 January 2016

Concise and clear Phil, conveying honest feelings so well!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success