I Met No One Like You... Poem by Richa Dhodi

I Met No One Like You...

Rating: 5.0


I met no one, so perfect like you,
I met no one, whose heart is guiltless like you,
And hold no thought of vanity,
And given hopes don’t delude.

I met no one, so clear- headed like you,
I met no one, whose eyes are pleasant,
And a tender heart to be jovial,
And who enchant with all his elegance.

Your quiet mind is richer than a crown,
Your sweet thoughts that savor the content.

Are all the admiring qualities, I behold,
Our liaison took an inward shape,
When you cared for me like the shadow of the sun.

I embraced all progress with you,
As your propinquity stroke me with ecstasy,
It soothes me to hold myself lucky,
To feel mirth and bliss to find a sweet consort like you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 28 March 2008

ric, well penned. Ian

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Austin Zaratzian 08 May 2008

it must have been a real trip to meet someone like this good job, perfect 10

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Rani Turton 08 May 2008

Very sweetly put in lines of perfect simplicity.

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Diwakar Bhatt 02 July 2012

beautiful lines indeed..............

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Reetessh Sabrr 02 October 2008

somebody's lucky and worthy enough to receive such admiring beautiful words richa!

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Trinity K 01 October 2008

what i saw is me in you what you did to me was what i needed with me....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Kesav Easwaran 29 September 2008

a love poem built on admiring words...simple easy going fluent style...good piece, Richa 10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 May 2008

yet the blazing glory of love by remembrance the sweet fragrance when flows by the cadence embracing the golden shadow by the green heart still swells by the dazzling glow of the blood....................nice poem, love when wishful by the luscious green, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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