I Miss You Poem by Ashwin Satyal

I Miss You

Rating: 2.5


Its been a month since uve gone,
Everything is messed up;
And all the things are yet to be done.

I miss you my dear,
I miss you a lot.
Your not replying my messages,
I remember the time we fought.

Im sorry dear, I wont do it again,
I agree that I was insane.
Even in my dream I feel your silky hair,
Without you dear, I cant overcome my fear.

I can never forget that memorable long drive,
Your love is what I need, Im really hungry for your love; Hence, I strive.
I see the box full of you letters; right beneath.
Oh god please help me! Put me whom i meant to be with.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hadi Arnaout 25 November 2009

hi your poem is so senstive it has strongs feelings but you can write more.... take care of the type writing mstakes. goodluck

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Joseph Poewhit 25 November 2009

Them letters become like gold

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