I Miss You Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

I Miss You

Rating: 5.0


Whatever heaven it is in your eyes,
I saw it promising beneath the lies.
Although it still is heaven, or hell
or whatever it is...your smile confirmed it all;
that whatever befalls my heart will fall.
So tell me what lies within your pretty lips
that caught me off guard-
tell me what lies within your pretty smile
that captured my soul apart.
Whatever paradise it is in your eyes,
I saw it glorious inspite the lies.
Although it might be heaven, or hell
or whatever it is...your tender look confirmed;
that when I looked back at my heart...
it spoke the words untold.
I miss you.
I miss the heaven I found in your eyes,
in that extraordinary night.
I miss the paradise in your eyes
in that simply glorious night:
A night I'll keep forever...
keeps me haunting forever without end.

Wednesday, October 29, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,heaven,lies
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 April 2020

Although it might be heaven, or or whatever it is...your tender look confirmed; that when I looked back at my heart... it spoke the words untold. I miss you. i miss the heavens and the paradise i found in you..... you are a wonderful romantic person. almost all your poems speak it out. thank you. tony

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Ency Bearis 04 November 2008

a true love well expressed...nice write for the soul mate...lovely... thumbs up 10 Ency Bearis

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