I Missed You Poem by mithzi silva

I Missed You

Rating: 5.0


Every night I sleep so sweet
With the sound of your heart beat

I try to remember why you love me so
But sometimes I just feel like I just don’t know

You went away for a short time
And reassured that it would be fine

My heart said trust him
But my head gave me thoughts grim

Days went on
Nights became a yawn

Your arrival was close
And it seemed like time froze

I thought it would be perfect
But would there be conflicts?

Only time will tell
Tell if I’ll be well

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Kraas 18 September 2008

This poem is very interesting.

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Ric Bastasa 17 September 2008

indeed touching.. i am touched to the bottom of my heart. i love it... a ten from me.

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Saint Cynosure 17 September 2008

This is really a nice piece of work, I enjoyed it a lot...

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Massemo Sunoko 17 September 2008

I see a patter n your poems(other than the fact that they are all good) they are really touching, i think i can relate to this. great job, i wish i was as talented as yourself

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