I Need A Chance.... Poem by TARA.. Star

Beautiful flight of fancy. CP

Nice little poem. I hope you will avail the chance. The world and the life is full of chances. I hope you will explore it to the best of your abilities. Best Wishes Naseer

beautiful, thanks for sharing

A universal piece, with message many will relate to, well penned

Your poem is full of innocence and is delightful in content and perception. Only thing, you need to leave out common told words to give your poem better effect. Nice thoughts..........keep writing..............arya with blessings.

wow it's a really nice poem..well done :)

this real good

I really like your poem.....its exprssional: p

wings of fire and wish to cherish and she wish to live like a bird..in this sky to... I wish to live in the stars, Might please me living so far. My presence would brightup them,

nice poem if wishes were horses then all could ride