Meet me here in my ring
Where I wrestle against my weakness
Over me, please sing
Your consoling song of deliverance
I need something stronger than strength
I need something bigger than faith
I get knocked out so easily
And I lost the appetite to fight back
So please meet me where I shatter
Where guilt and reproof are booing me
Let me experience your presence
Let me see your face
I need something louder than words
I need something more
I need you
But this is with small letter 'you', so the poems become a very thought-provoking poem, but loveliest created.
is that IMA or GOD, our Lord Almighty? 5 Stars full for this though-provoking lovely poem.. Your line 'I need you' IF you ended this line with I need You, then I know for sure that you meant GOD.
Excellent poem, true to your own words, only as you confess in this poem, you need somethng more, let me cite your last three lines: I need something louder than words I need something more I need you. WHO is that you,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful as a rose blooming Bravo!