Our relationship's like a piece of music
We captivate each other with melodies mystic
With our love we create such blissful rhythm
And with gladness we overflow to the brim
We play our verses of love beautifully
Harmonized with sensations so lovely
With our sweet choruses we got each other transfixed
Unaware of what's going to happen next
Then something's wrong in the bridge part
It suddenly, breaks my heart
A sad ending begins, this is so wrong
Our love's fading as quickly as a four minute song
Nice poem.Keep sharing Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
sorry about the ending of a love affair..... there'll be others. Keep your pen at work.. Regards Sally
this is lovely, love can be so much like beautiful music, both sad and romantic
Very nice expressions through muse. However, it raises a doubt. Whether it is love or it is just an infatuation?
I like your comparing love to a song. Sadly, many loves come into our lives and end too briefly, like a four minute song. But these songs are just preparing you for the grand symphony..... that will go on and on. You already have your seat in the theatre of life; now it's just a matter of time. May the next music you hear be written just for you. I enjoyed your poem..... a nice play on words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is the way life is and this poem describes matter of life well.