I Need You Now Poem by Amitava Sur

I Need You Now

Rating: 4.5


Yes I need you to be by my side
And hold me to set me right.

I’m sliding fast to a dark hole down-
Hold my hand and show me the light.

In sun light also I can see nothing
Darkness is all around me.

Sorrows and pains are so intense
I’m dumb stuck with them only.

Hold me … show me …give me the light
I need You now to come out.

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Amitava (27.03.2014)

Thursday, March 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: God
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2014

Read this nice poem of yours. 'Yes I need you to be by my side And hold me to set me right.' - The poem begins with this yearning of a distraught mind to be held by some one, this really touched me.

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Noreen Carden 29 March 2014

There is such fear and helplessness in this poem it breaks the heart with its rawness great great poem

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Roseann Shawiak 27 March 2014

Beautiful plea for help through the grief, Amitava. Heartfelt and frightened at the same time. 'Yes, I need you to be by my side and hold me to set me right'. Whatever I can do, Amitava, I will BE here for you. I will keep the light shining in poetry to help you find your way out.

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