I Owe You! Poem by Deepti Agarwal

I Owe You!

Rating: 5.0


Glistening eyes, full of love
Fears the pain of seperation

Strength one feels in Thy company
In just words and concerns.

Truth is just the bonding
No matter where is standing

Blood and flesh bears no importance
Wavelengths match, is everything.

Born to me or not – made me
A mother, in every thought.

How pleased and blessed I feel
Knowing you is best of my steal.

31/03/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

An excellent poem.10++ for mother.

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Saurabh Som 15 April 2008

Ma'am! ! This is about me and you ma'am! :) and another thing ma'am... u dont owe me anything...... Nobdy apart from me knows how much this means to me...... And yes...i still think u resemble my mommy in a way.........

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Vaibhav Shah 02 April 2008

I could not make out to whom you owe.But it is clear that you respect this relation very much and have a deep feeling for that objeat.A touching poem.Good.

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Marvelous. Shows the strength of bonding. Nice beginning- PK

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