Enchanted! ! Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Enchanted! !

Rating: 5.0

Crawling on the
snake like curvy roads,
relishing every inch of
greens all around,
feasting on the fragrance
of the - dissipated wild flowers,
captivated by the cool
clouds touching the skin,
letting my hungry eyes
devour the beauty of the hills,
found myself enchanted
amidst the heavy woods! ! !


Sarwar Chowdhury 06 October 2009

enchanting beauty here! fine diction! 10+

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Indira Renganathan 06 October 2009

A real, natural, beautiful feel on a joy-ride....lovely....and thanks for your immediate comment on my poem

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 October 2009

as a hill station boarding school student...for very long..these curvy roads and all that greenery used to bring creeps to me...at that time the flat plane and scorching sun used to be my favourites.....it took me very long to fall in loc\vr with a hill station...a lovey journey you takes us on.....10

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Kesav Easwaran 06 October 2009

good lines all through...a write very much refreshing to read...thanks Deepti...10

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Vijay Menon 08 October 2009

its nice sweet words written on a subject we keep close to our heart 10+++

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Ranjit Ravindran 14 November 2009

This one brings nature right into my heart. A lovely write. Makes me remember of my beautiful childhood when I could experiance these. Now its a mad rush..the nature just blinks past my eyes.

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 16 October 2009

fabulous composition.............

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Nalini Hebbar 12 October 2009

beautiful is all i can say...nature's glory very well captured...regards

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Nalathai Vongjalorn 12 October 2009

Love the poem it deserves a 10++

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Jyoti Saxena 11 October 2009

i share the love of wilderness with you -your poem makes me nostalgic! it has a classical touch to it-thanks for sharing the exprience.

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