I Pledge No Allegiance (C) 5-28-2010 Comments

You are not just a poet, you are a great Poet. You exactly know how to express great pieces of wisdom with rich metaphors and images using a very melodious and rich vocabulary. As for the content of this poem, I find my own convictions back here. Money, power and greed spur on greedy politicians to tell us tons of lies, trying to make us fearful, or even calling on our noble wants, only to make themselves more rich and powerful. It is a fact. Please stick to your commitment expressed here, never to join the army or become greedy. Young poets like you have another mission to fulfil... and you are well on the way. Keep it up, man.