I Promise Poem by Amanda Strickland

I Promise



You said you didn't want to go back
Didn't want to go down the same track
You said you needed someone to be there
No one was, it all seemed so unfair

Until, you said, I came around
You said you felt so alone, dug in the ground
I promise to never betray you
I promise to love you
Until we die, we'll stay together
I promise you my forever

You said you loved me too
Yeah, I know you do
Your voice, the way you say it
Send chills up my spine, please don't stop it

As the time passes slowly
4 months exactly
You felt that I was the one.
You wanted to be with me until life was done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer Noneofyoubuz 08 December 2009

these are not too bad jk its a good poem, and btw its Jen incase you haven't figured it out! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ying Escalona 25 November 2009

forever is not enough Amanda...

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Catrina Heart 25 November 2009

touching indeed....lovely poem shared! ! !

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