I register protest
To the self and question
Why do I want to loose prestige and honor?
If readers and other poets pay no more
I find quiet disgusting
If poems invite no noticing
May it be lacking real poetic interest
Or may not be considered worth and best
It is possible but I read one
Offer at least three comments on poems of any one
I give full attention of new and old
I think my idea is not properly sold
Well I take it on serious note
Write nothing but observe silence
Read but offer no comments as they do
May be silence is the best weapon to prove true
I have found courtesy
On different sites and many others
The reader acknowledge with “Like”
Or sometimes agree with “dislikes”
well thought Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi12 minutes ago i also feel the same your worries are true, .........
Dear Prahbu Sir, As you noted Nishkama Karma is notFruitless actionBhagaavat Gita 2: 47 clarifies this: Karmmnye vadhikarasthe/ma bhaleshu kdachana/ma karmabhalahethur bhu: /ma te samgoastha karmani(You have right to do yur duty(action) not in result-bhaleshu-; It shold not be expecting result-(it implies the result naturally evolves.It is divine gift.We should not desire for it.etc.) .But you should not be disinterested in not doing your duty.] As T.S.Eliot's idea it is dissociation of sensibility in our action. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Sep 28,2013
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A very beautiful poem with a sense of counseling. Sir, I humbly request a small correction in the third line of the fourth stanza P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Sep 27,2013
You are very correct, Hashmukhji.My poem Be Frank itself is also of this theme.Many are not natural poets.They write neither for their enjoyment nor for others or to give any message to society.So they do not read or comment.They have nothing to comment.So let us do our duty.As Swami Vivekananda said: throw a stone in to water, the ripples will reach somewhere and create change. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Sep 27,2013
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I register protest To the self and question